Yes,I do. well,I can't emphasize enough the importance of ad

Yes,I do. well,I can't emphasize enough the importance of advertisements,cuz there's a range of ads I see on a regularly basis,such as in the street or in the supermarkets and you know,so on and so forth. so I guess more and more people select things by thinking of ads. 有没有语法错误,请大神指出来。因为我需要背的。我会给高分悬赏分的。
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瞳和遥 幼苗

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你可以用中文写一次第二句麼? 我没看懂你要表达什麼 "emphasize..." 那里

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"in supermarkets" 不用the

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"and u know" 可以删掉

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最後改成"so i guess more n more people's decisions are influenced by ads" 因为thinking of 这样用不太好

fiy444 举报

第二句 是 广告的重要性再怎么强调也不足为过,因为这里有许多广告我经常会看到。

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it is of great importance to the daily lives. 这个句子对么。

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建议改成"The importance of ads cannot be fully explained in just a few words as there's a wide range of ads we see on our regular basis and they hv invaded our lifes through every means, such...(接下面)"

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你刚刚这句也好 比较简短。因为也不知道你要来干嘛 怕你是计时的汇报 不敢删字 :p
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