英语翻译Thanks!You do very well.The writings are meaningful and

英语翻译
Thanks!You do very well.The writings are meaningful and they contain few mistakes.Just pay more attention to attributive clauses.
Read them again and find time to revise.Get rid of ACs which are unnecessary and correct the wrong ones.
Try by yourself and I'll advise you later.
尽量说得让人明白一点,用在线翻译的看了根本无法理解,