修改英语作文Last weekend we went to a park,John went fishing,and w

修改英语作文
Last weekend we went to a park,John went fishing,and went to climb the mountain.Zhangpeng was swimming while Sarah was skiing.Mike liked pictures so he went to take photos.Amy went boating in the lake while we played happily together.
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语法似乎没什么问题...是内容不好吗

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不是。我感觉,有些过去式没有改

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"John went fishing, and went to climb the mountain." 这句这样写不好,看起来也怪怪的。
应该改为John went fishing and climbed the mountain.
Amy went boating in the lake while we played happily together.
这句的Amy ...

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