请帮我修改英语作文主要看语法 单词拼写My vacation planThis summer vacation ,I h
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主要看语法 单词拼写
My vacation plan
This summer vacation ,I have a long vacation ,so I decide to go to the bleach with my family and my friends.I am going to there by plane.
We are leaving for a beautiful sunny day.We are staying until two days.I plan to have an exciting vacation.
In the first day morning,we are going shopping.We want to buy some beautiful swimming wears for us.In the afternoon we are arriving.We are going to a hotel next to the beach.Next day,we are swimming.The sea is very cold.Then we are playing the sand.I want to make a rabbit.In the afternoon,we are eating watermelons and a water ice.
What an exciting,I can`t wait.
主要看语法 单词拼写
My vacation plan
This summer vacation ,I have a long vacation ,so I decide to go to the bleach with my family and my friends.I am going to there by plane.
We are leaving for a beautiful sunny day.We are staying until two days.I plan to have an exciting vacation.
In the first day morning,we are going shopping.We want to buy some beautiful swimming wears for us.In the afternoon we are arriving.We are going to a hotel next to the beach.Next day,we are swimming.The sea is very cold.Then we are playing the sand.I want to make a rabbit.In the afternoon,we are eating watermelons and a water ice.
What an exciting,I can`t wait.
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1行题目三个词的首字母最好都大写.
2行,bleach是不应该是beach（海滩）?
3行going后面没有to,因为there是副词.
4行：我们要待两天那句改为：We will stay there for two days.
6行开头in改为on , going to shop
7行swimming suits泳衣. for us去掉或者改为for ourselves.后面We will arrive there.
8行,We will swim in the sea.不是所有的动词都可以加ing作将来时!- - 然后这是计划,你怎么知道会很冷,如果知道怎么会写“要游泳”?所以后面改：If the sea is cold, we will play with sands.
9行,we are eating 改为we plan to eat .后面的water ice 是 什么?冰激凌的话是ice cream.
最后一行,What an exciting vacation!
不得不说你的英语太……了
2行,bleach是不应该是beach（海滩）?
3行going后面没有to,因为there是副词.
4行：我们要待两天那句改为：We will stay there for two days.
6行开头in改为on , going to shop
7行swimming suits泳衣. for us去掉或者改为for ourselves.后面We will arrive there.
8行,We will swim in the sea.不是所有的动词都可以加ing作将来时!- - 然后这是计划,你怎么知道会很冷,如果知道怎么会写“要游泳”?所以后面改：If the sea is cold, we will play with sands.
9行,we are eating 改为we plan to eat .后面的water ice 是 什么?冰激凌的话是ice cream.
最后一行,What an exciting vacation!
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