求大神帮我修改英语作文!My New FriendHe is Gao Mingyang,the person who h

求大神帮我修改英语作文!
My New Friend
He is Gao Mingyang,the person who has left me the deepest impression.Hebei province is supposed to be his homeland.And now,he comes to Donghua Univercity to get majored in Mechanical Engineering.
I still remember the sentence that he said to me:"I can hardly suppress my excitement the moment I stepped into the gate of Donghua Univercity."Obviously,he is a boy full of passion,and the most essential thing for him is to study hard in order to get closer to his dream.By the way,being an engineer is his dream.As far as I'm concerned,Gao Mingyang is independent as well as aggressive.When it comes to his future,he may be confronted with varieties of obstacles,however,as the saying goes:"everything comes to him who waits".I believe that he will spare no efforts to work on it and never give up.
In his spare time,he is frequently drowned in graceful music and also playing football,which can refresh him from the pressure when he is in a foul temper.As a result of the love for football,kaka becomes his favorite idol.
That's a little about him,if you are willing to know him,just to be his friends.
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