修改英语作文today's afternoon ,when I was on the way to the conema

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today's afternoon ,when I was on the way to the conema.
I saw an old man that who looked so worried is asking for help.
I went to him and said that what could I help you
The old man said with anxiety that he lost the way to the hospital that his son works in.
I did what I could to clam him ,and then I told him that we could go there together.
He was so happy that I could help him.
At last,the old man found his son and appreiated me a lot.
But when I arrived at the cinema ,the film had already ended.I think,though I missed the film,I didn't feel disappointed.And I also think,it was worth helping others when they are in trouble.
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1楼2楼，纯属骗分，一楼的看都没看就贴了一遍，CINEMA打错了，都没看见，2楼更扯淡，把问题复制了一遍居然还说不知道，那你来回答干什么？
不用全文打，只要说哪里要修改，怎么改就好，还可以HI我，马上要用，