求高手修改英语作文!Today,I gotup at seven‘o clock.At first ,I brushed

求高手修改英语作文!
Today,I gotup at seven‘o clock.At first ,I brushed myteeth and washed my face.Then,I ate bread and drank a bottle of milk as mybreakfast.Finally,I wrote my biology homework.After dinner.My fatherand I go to the gym.And ran two rounds the gym.Then,we played tennis the pasthour.I feel very happy.
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想是伴侣 幼苗

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第二行as应该改为for吧,as不顺眼.那个finally可不可以改成after that?
第三行go改为went ,And后加we,两处the前面加in.
其实你的today是什么意思?是指当写日记一样叙述今天发生的事情还是什么.

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we played tennis the pasthour改为we spent half an hour in playing tennis 是不是表示用了一个半小时打乒乓球?这样表达更好一些 球采纳谢谢

戒烟如_你 幼苗

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as改为for,my breakfast 去掉my,wrote 改为did,go to the gym 中 go改为went,ran two rounds in the gym,把 the pasthour 去掉,可写成we played tennis there。i felt very happy

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时间上过渡性有点大,而且过去式运用不到位。应该是 My father and I went to the gym,and ran two rounds around the gym. Then,we played tennis the next hour. I felt verry happy.不知道对你有没有帮助,加油哦!

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