求帮忙修改英语作文,Dear Fran,About your problems,I think I can give y

求帮忙修改英语作文,
Dear Fran,
About your problems,I think I can give you some advices.First,you said you don't know how do you help Mei out.If I were you,I would tell her that she's really clever and her English is well.Second,I think you should help her to overcome shy.It's very important.Then you tell me that everyone is sure she will win.If I were you,I would tell the rest of the students that they shouldn't be too much pressure to her.This will make her feel scared.
I hope my advice can help to you.
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陈小花 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

liyinyu2007 幼苗

共回答了15个问题采纳率:93.3% 举报

I think I can give you some advices. (adxices改为advice)
you said you don't know how do you (do you改为to)
her English is well (is well改为pretty good)
you should help her to overcome shy (shy改为shymess)
Then you tell me (me改为her)
they shouldn't be (be改为give)
feel scared. (scared改为anxious)

1年前

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灯塔爷们 幼苗

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you said you don't know how do you help Mei out.If I were you,删掉读读看呢

1年前

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军哥的博客 幼苗

共回答了22个问题 举报

how do you 改为how to;well换成wonderful;shy换成shyness;If I were you,I would tell the rest of the students that they shouldn't be too much pressure to her;If I were you去掉,would改为want to; shouldn't be 改为shouldn't give;This改为It; I hope my advice can help to you中to去掉

1年前

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