帮我修改修改英语作文!赏20!今晚就要,看看有没有用词不当和拼写错误的!My familyHello!Everyone.
帮我修改修改英语作文!赏20!
今晚就要,看看有没有用词不当和拼写错误的!
My family
Hello!Everyone.I’m Lin bingjie.Please call me Beenle.I have a family.There are four people in my famliy,my parents,my borther and I.My famliy is pretty good!I’m really happy!
My father si a teacher.He works in university of BNU.He doesn’t like watching TV,but He likes reading newspapers and books.He is good at computers,and likes play sports very much!He said:“Sports si good at my health!.”
My mother si a manager.She is a good manager of office and a good mother in home.I think she is pretty,because she is kind-hearted.
My bother si cute and funniest in my family.He is one years old.He just can call “mother”,“father”and “sister”.I think he is smart,because he can often have some surprise for me!
My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home!
今晚就要,看看有没有用词不当和拼写错误的!
My family
Hello!Everyone.I’m Lin bingjie.Please call me Beenle.I have a family.There are four people in my famliy,my parents,my borther and I.My famliy is pretty good!I’m really happy!
My father si a teacher.He works in university of BNU.He doesn’t like watching TV,but He likes reading newspapers and books.He is good at computers,and likes play sports very much!He said:“Sports si good at my health!.”
My mother si a manager.She is a good manager of office and a good mother in home.I think she is pretty,because she is kind-hearted.
My bother si cute and funniest in my family.He is one years old.He just can call “mother”,“father”and “sister”.I think he is smart,because he can often have some surprise for me!
My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home!
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共回答了11个问题采纳率：81.8% 举报
My father si a teacher——My father is a teacher
Sports si good at my health——Sports is good at my health
My mother si a manager.——My mother is a manager.
My bother si cute and funniest 怎么老是把is打错
He is one years old. year后面不需要s.
My families are always doing what is best for me. family不用复数
Sports si good at my health——Sports is good at my health
My mother si a manager.——My mother is a manager.
My bother si cute and funniest 怎么老是把is打错
He is one years old. year后面不需要s.
My families are always doing what is best for me. family不用复数
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共回答了2个问题 举报
My father si a teacher——My father is a teacher
Sports si good at my health——Sports is good at my health
My mother si a manager.——My mother is a manager.
My bother si cute and funniest
My families are always doing what is best for me. ——My family are always doing what is best for me.
Sports si good at my health——Sports is good at my health
My mother si a manager.——My mother is a manager.
My bother si cute and funniest
My families are always doing what is best for me. ——My family are always doing what is best for me.
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