谁能帮我修改一下作文 改的详细一点 更好一点
谁能帮我修改一下作文 改的详细一点 更好一点
My holiday
Today is Sunday.I go to the farmer park.We go to the farmer park by bus,it is far from here.
I can see three pigs,but they can dive.I buy two gifts,they are nice.
We have good time ,today.What's your happy day Have you ever been there?
My holiday
Today is Sunday.I go to the farmer park.We go to the farmer park by bus,it is far from here.
I can see three pigs,but they can dive.I buy two gifts,they are nice.
We have good time ,today.What's your happy day Have you ever been there?
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我……多加点描写,例如cute pigs,tell me ,why you buy two gifts ,what 'syour gifts
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额。。 详细点 可以加入到文中去吗？
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你能帮帮他们吗