孙吉庆1979
花朵
共回答了20个问题采纳率:95% 举报
一下都是个人意见
原文:I think a lot of problems you must solve in the future depend on independence.个人意见:I think you must solve a lot of problems in the future depend on independence.
原文:So what my opinion is young adults should independence from their parents as soon as possible.个人意见:So my opinion is young adults should be independent from their parents as soon as possible.(去掉what,增加be在independent前)
原文:children may have too few experience to issue the problems in their live,study,communications,or so on.个人意见:children wiil have few experience to issue the problems in their live,study,communications,and so on.
原文:But what I think is that this is a worthwhile 个人意见:But I think this is a worthwhile
原文:To address this problem I would like to say,个人意见:I would like to say someting to solve this problem
原文:by solving the problem yourself 个人意见:to solve the problem by yourself
其他的就没什么了
你是不是很喜欢用那些从句的句型?可是你也不能乱用啊.你读着就不别扭?你要是考托福,美国老师没有句型加分,只有错了减分,一个语法错误,1分,时态,1分,单词,1分.所以你要很注意你写的要都是对的,如果你写的都是对的,那总分也不会降到哪里,但是不要乱用句型
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