帮我看一下这篇英语文章有语病么?紧急!如果有,请帮我改一下
帮我看一下这篇英语文章有语病么?紧急!如果有,请帮我改一下
Touched around
In my side,every day has touched me
But the most moved me,is full of love,the most beautiful WuJuPing aunt.She used her hands,caught the tenth floor of the fall from the little girl Niuniu.WuJuPing aunt hands though is seriously injured,but little girl Niuniu saved.
Thank you,WuJuPing aunt,you have touched me,touched Hangzhou,touched Zhejiang and the whole of China!
Touched around
In my side,every day has touched me
But the most moved me,is full of love,the most beautiful WuJuPing aunt.She used her hands,caught the tenth floor of the fall from the little girl Niuniu.WuJuPing aunt hands though is seriously injured,but little girl Niuniu saved.
Thank you,WuJuPing aunt,you have touched me,touched Hangzhou,touched Zhejiang and the whole of China!
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In my side（加这个想表达?）,i was being moved everyday.
However,the person who has touched me most is the beautiful and warm-hearted woman,WU Ju Ping.She used her own hands to catch the little girl Niu Niu who was falling from the tenth floor.Though Ms WU's hands were seriously injured,the little girl Niu Niu was saved.
Thank you,Ms WU,you have touched me,touched Hangzhou,touched Zhejiang and the whole of China!
However,the person who has touched me most is the beautiful and warm-hearted woman,WU Ju Ping.She used her own hands to catch the little girl Niu Niu who was falling from the tenth floor.Though Ms WU's hands were seriously injured,the little girl Niu Niu was saved.
Thank you,Ms WU,you have touched me,touched Hangzhou,touched Zhejiang and the whole of China!
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