【急】帮我看一下这篇英语文章有语病吗
【急】帮我看一下这篇英语文章有语病吗
touched around
In my side,every day has touched me
But the most moved me,is full of love,the most beautiful WuJuPing aunt.She used her hands,caught the tenth floor of the fall from the little girl Niuniu.WuJuPing aunt hands though is seriously injured,but little girl Niuniu saved.
Thank you,WuJuPing aunt,you have touched me,touched Hangzhou,touched Zhejiang and the whole of China!
touched around
In my side,every day has touched me
But the most moved me,is full of love,the most beautiful WuJuPing aunt.She used her hands,caught the tenth floor of the fall from the little girl Niuniu.WuJuPing aunt hands though is seriously injured,but little girl Niuniu saved.
Thank you,WuJuPing aunt,you have touched me,touched Hangzhou,touched Zhejiang and the whole of China!
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In my opinion,every day touches me.
But who most moves me is the most beautiful aunt WuJuPing full of love.She used her hands to catch the little girl Niuniu falling from the tenth floor.Although aunt WuJuPing's hands were seriously injured,the little girl Niuniu was saved.
Thank you,aunt WuJuPing,you have touched me,touched Hangzhou,touched Zhejiang and the whole China!
In my opinion,every day touches me.
But who most moves me is the most beautiful aunt WuJuPing full of love.She used her hands to catch the little girl Niuniu falling from the tenth floor.Although aunt WuJuPing's hands were seriously injured,the little girl Niuniu was saved.
Thank you,aunt WuJuPing,you have touched me,touched Hangzhou,touched Zhejiang and the whole China!
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