请各位英语大神帮忙修改一下以下的英文文章,本人英文不好,有很多语病,先谢谢了。

请各位英语大神帮忙修改一下以下的英文文章,本人英文不好,有很多语病,先谢谢了。
First, family labor are small scale working, if man and woman do it together, then the results withlead to mixed result. For example, is about washing dishes, some wash very clean but some are not clean at all. And also about clean the house. Base ontraditional culture, boy feel“shock”when he is clean the toilet or the place are very dirty, so the boy may be clean the dirty place casually.So the girl must be clean the dish, toilet again. So according this two example, we know it not only make the results will lead to mixed results , it also will be wasted if boy do skilled work and the same time girl would be easy to be injured if they do menial jobs

Second, is because the thinking mode for boy and girl have similar different. Girls are good at image thinking and convergent thinking,but may be not so good atlogical thinking. Boys are good at logical thinking, but they may be don’toften pay enough attention to the details.

Third, division of labor between girl and boy, each one is responsible for a piece of work, to reducedifferent views of the same friction about the work. For example, is about the education of children.,father and mother may behave different methods on teaching children, if two people also focus toeducation for children, the children may be feel some troubles because parents teach their children the values and norms are different ,it may be have some friction,It is no good for children. I give one example , is in the traditional culture,if the children bully by another people, father may be teach children go tobully back the people but the mother may be teach children do care about this.So the children don't know what to do next
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First, the family work together in small scale, if men and women, so the results lead mixed. For example, about the dishes, wash clothes very clean but some not clean. About cleaning the house. The foundation of traditional culture, the boy was "shocked" when he was cleaning the toilets or place is very dirty, so the boy can clean dirty place. So the girls must clean plate, and then the toilet. Therefore, these two examples, we know that it not only makes the results will lead to different results, this also will be if the child doing technical work at the same time the girl will easily if they do menial work second injured waste, because of the boy and the girl's way of thinking has a similar difference. The girl is good at image thinking and convergent thinking, but may not be very good atlogical thinking. The boy is good at logical thinking, but they may don'toften attention to detail. Third, the division of labor between girls and boys, each person is responsible for a piece of work, related to the same friction point reducedifferent. For example, the education of children. , father and mother behavior may be different methods to educate the children, if two people also pay attention to education child, the child may feel that some trouble, because the parents teach their children the values and norms of different, it may have some friction, which is not good for the children. I cite an example, in the traditional culture, if bullying by another child, the father can teach children to bully people back but the mother can teach children to do care about this. So the children don't know what to do next.

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