这个英语句子有没有什么语病（谢谢）帮忙修改一下.

Failed in this examination, I want to say to myself it does not matter! Study hard, I encourage myself and believe in myself. I will never give up and I am confident that I will be the best! As to next month 's exams, I am expecting to achieve a good result! I am sure my results will be better and better. Let us sing the song of "I want to fly higher! "

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典型的中译英，建议你把I will more and more excellent改成I will be better and better。前面那种说法实在让人很无语。说英语没必要这么死板，随意一些

In spite of the failure in this examination, I don't lose heart. For I believe in myself, and that if I work harder and never give up, I will always be the best. And I'm sure that I'll achieve satisfactory results in the coming exams next month.I will do better and better, just as the song goes"i want to fly higher and higher".

纯中文式的翻页，彻底被打败。

哪个？