·大家帮我看一下暑假英语日记是否有语病 Monday August 14th sunny Today the weather was not very hot,so I went to movies whit my couson.He was very funny and interesting.Guess,what film we watched.Oh,it was “harry potter and the order of the phoenix.” I don’t mind this movie,but my cousinlove it very much. After that,we played basketball.It was a nice dayisn’t it?
Monday August 14th sunny Today the weather was not very hot,so I went to the movies with my couson.She was very funny and interested.Guess,what film we watched.Oh,it was “Harry Potter and the order of the phoenix.” I don’t like this movie,but my cousinlove it very much. After that,we played basketball.It was a nice day isn't it? 这是我改过的.
Monday August 14th sunny Today (日记不要用today直接就可以说了,因为上面有写日期)the weather was not very hot,so I went to movies(前面有go to后面要么写go to see a movie 要么写go to the cinema) whit(with) my couson(写错了).He was ve...
It was not very hot today. I went to see a movie with my cousin. He is a very interesting person. Guess what movie we watched? It was "harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix". I don't think muc...