帮忙看下这篇英语文章,有没有什么语法,搭配,词汇错误!有更好的删改意见也可以提!
帮忙看下这篇英语文章,有没有什么语法,搭配,词汇错误!有更好的删改意见也可以提!
Forgive me ,I need you in my life;
Forgive me ,I want to be with you when I grow old.
When I wake up in the morning,You are all I see;
And how happy you make me.You''re everything I wanted;
I look at you and know;That you are all to me.
I just wish someday and somehow,together we''ll stay,Always and forever.
Forgive me,I never wanting to be apart with you
Forgive me ,I need you in my life;
Forgive me ,I want to be with you when I grow old.
When I wake up in the morning,You are all I see;
And how happy you make me.You''re everything I wanted;
I look at you and know;That you are all to me.
I just wish someday and somehow,together we''ll stay,Always and forever.
Forgive me,I never wanting to be apart with you
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把第二行的 grow改成am.
第四行的前半部分改写成And you make me so happy好些.
第五行的all改成everything好些.to改成for.
第四行的前半部分改写成And you make me so happy好些.
第五行的all改成everything好些.to改成for.
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请高手帮忙看下这段英文写的是否正确,语法有没错误.如有应怎么发.
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你能帮帮他们吗