帮我看下这篇英语短文、我只是个初三的、望各位看看、希望指出语法错误、（bear 我同学、Lao Shi老师）Dear b

帮我看下这篇英语短文、
我只是个初三的、望各位看看、希望指出语法错误、（bear 我同学、Lao Shi老师）
Dear bear：
How time flies,I still remember the day that I first met you.At that time,when I was hearing someone new coming to our class,I was so excited and couldn't wait to see who it was.when I saw you,I just began to pay attention to you,although you didn't know,As time went by,finally we get together,how strange it was.
But unluckily,this summer we are going to say goodbye to each other,I know this isn't our ending,because there is a promise between us,I have ever said I'm not a good boy because I can't make you feel the happiness...
Lao Shi said if you wanted to keep a habit,you must keep it doing for at least three months.maybe I can keep the habit to be used to caring about you.
step by step,I still look for the way to your heart.Do you know...
I'm so sorry that I have done nothing for you,I just can give you the best wishes and memories,I know you are always forgetful,but please remember me forever,whatever happens,you're the first one I can't forget...
（随便翻译下、谢谢、、、）
有没语法错误啊?、另外 神奇 怎么说、