英语翻译The lightisdying,forone thing,as Earth’s orbit aroundthe

　　原文太乱了,现排一下版：The light is dying,for one thing,as Earth’s orbit around the sun and tilt on its axis combine to carry us in this hemisphere further away from receiving the sun’s rays most directly.
　　译文：光在一点一点地消逝,因为地球绕着太阳运行的轨道和它在自身轴线上的倾斜的共同作用,使生活在这个半球的我们离最直接接受太阳直射的位置越来越远.

The light is dying, for one thing, as Earth's orbit around the sun and tilt on its axis combine to carry us in this hemisphere further away from receiving the sun's rays most directly
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你的这句话，是不是有问题呀，有些单词连在一起