我写了一段英文,Finally,I wish I shall find a man whom I find long t

我写了一段英文,
Finally,I wish I shall find a man whom I find long time.
He will have tasted that I had tasted.
He will have gone that I had gone.
He will hve visited that I had seen.
He will have felt warm that I had smiled.
He will have felt sad that I had cried.
He will have done everything that I had done in order to compensates me for his absent in the past of me.
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我觉得语态不对.排比的句子语态
will have done sth that I had done
你是希望他已经做过这些事情?还是希望将来和你一起去?
如果前者,请用
I will find a man who I seek for long.
He must have the delicious what I have taste
He must have been where I have gone
He must have visist.
.
He must have done everything that I did before to compenstate his absentce in my life.
后者请用
I will find a man who I seek for long.
He will taste what I have taste
He will go where I have gone
He.
He will do everything that I did before to compenstate his absence in my life
I shall 是我一定能找到.那wish这种表示只有飘渺希望的祈使语气就不好听了.
不过楼主我喜欢你的意境.

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谢谢你那么耐心的帮我解答哈!
我想表达的意思是希望在将来遇见一个人。他可以做我曾经做过的事情。他会品偿我所偿过的(人生百味)。他会去我曾去过的(地方)。他会看我曾写下的(东西或文字)。他会感知我以前的快乐。他会伤心我曾经的伤心。他会做一切我曾经做过的事,只是为了弥补在我过去的时光他缺席的岁月。
想表达这个意境哦。所以前面用的将来完成时,后面用的过去完成时。不知对否

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呵呵,真棒。
所以建议你用 He will,因为他将会去做。
如果He must 就变成你见到他的时候,他已经怎样怎样了。

I wish I could mee some one, who will do what I did, being what I experienced, visit where I went, read what I wrote. He will understand my happiness and share my sorrow. He will do everything I did, just to compensate his absence in my life.

这样可能就通顺些了。
祝你圆梦。

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谢谢你啊!受益匪浅!借你吉言!
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