写了一段英文,请各位帮忙看看有没有错

下面是我对您的短文的修改,供参考：

Bobby applied for a loan on Jan 1^st,but it was rejected because of his
wrong address.Bobby was unsatisfied because he did not get any notice until
he got the letter of rejection on Feb 7^th.
Bobby believes that because nobody had informed him of the reason for
the rejection before Feb 7^th,which caused him to lose the chance for
changing the address in time and make another application,so he requested for
a compensation of 100 dollars.

Bobby applied for a loan on Jan 1st , but it was rejected because of his address issues.
后面的你写的意思我都不太懂。。
你中文发一遍，我帮你改吧。