修改英语作文I am writing to apply a bank loan.I am a collenge stud

作文内容是是要写封贷款的信吧
我写此信的目的是为了申请贷款.我是大学生,目前正在修读4年的课程.我的家庭很穷,父母都是农民,兄弟姐妹们都还在读书.希望我的请求可以被准许.
I am writing to apply for a bank loan.I am a college student who is undergoing a 4-years study course.My family is poor with parents as farmers,and siblings who are still attending school.Hope that my request can be granted approval.
Thanks.
Yours sincerely,
Name.

I am writing to apply for the bank loaner position. I am a college student who have studied 填下某某专业吧 for four years.my family is not so rich because my parents are both farmers. Morever my younger sister and younger borther are still students, so i need that job. 加油加油。。

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I am writing to apply （for）a bank loan. I am a college student who will have the four-year-study courses.My family is not so rich （because)my parents are both farmers. Morever my sister and borther are still students,and the tuition fee is heavy for me, so I want to apply for a bank loan 是申请助学贷款么？