求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q

求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q
Dear sir,
I’m a student at Ningbo University .On summer vacation ,I have a lots of time to do something what I like to do.
I think I should have a part-time job during the coming summer vacation.
In free time ,I like to do something about computer .So I think I will do well if I get the job .
I hope you will give me a chance to do it .If you think it will be ok ,please call 631059.
Thank you for reading this letter .I’m looking forward to your reply.
Your’s
Huang
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孤山念辉 幼苗

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Dear sir,
I’m a student in Ningbo University .On summer vacation ,I have a lot of time to do whatever I like to do.
I think I should have a part-time job during the coming summer vacation.
In my free time ,I'd like to do something about computer .So I think I will do it well when I get the job .
I hope you will give me a chance to do it . If it is ok ,please call 631059.
Thank you for reading this letter .I’m looking forward to your reply.
Your’s
Huang

1年前

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酸菜馅儿ee 幼苗

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,I have a lots of time to do something what I like to do.这句话不是很好。
a lot of=lots of 没有 a lots of.
plenty of在英语中显得比较得意
一个富有的人说Today,I got plenty of money.
…something what I like to do…

1年前

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在深圳 幼苗

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Dear sir,
I’m a student from Ningbo University .During the summer break , rether than spending the summer without doing anything, i prefer to do something that i wished.
In my free time ,I li...

1年前

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