帮忙看下小弟的英语作文,不足之处请指出,

帮忙看下小弟的英语作文,不足之处请指出,
I don't know what I want ,or what is my life target,and I don't know I was what kind
of man .
I always think ,maybe almost people ask themselves,what I want ,what I need ,
and then ,what I gonna do,perhaps just enjoy this process.
Some people need friend ,or money ,power,sex etc.The key is do you have a
dream,its noble or vulgar.What ever,it belongs to you.
What are you suppose to do,to get more and faster what you want,of course,
under your principle.Don't care about what others think of you.
ugly,fat,false loftiness,selfish,arrogance,hypocrisy,all the bad words to describe
you.Remember this,different people think you are not the same.
Remeber your dream ,then to make it come ture.The key is to enjoy this process.
中文意思大概就是,我不知道我想要什么,或者我的生活目标是什么,又或者我到底是个什么人.
我一直这样想,大多数人会问自己,我想要什么,得到之后又怎样,可能只是在享受这个过程.
一些人需要朋友,一些人需要钱,权利,美色等等,重要的是有没有梦想,是高尚或者低俗,无论怎样,那是属于你的.
你该怎样去做才能更多更快的得到你想要的,当然,在你的原则允许以内,不用在乎别人怎么看待你.
丑陋,肥胖,假清高,自私,自大,虚伪,所有的不好的词语来形容你,记住这个,不同的人眼中有不同的你,
记住你的梦想,然后实现它,关键是去享受这个过程