帮我看看哪个好There are five people in my house:grandma,grandpa,fat

帮我看看哪个好
There are five people in my house:grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me.My mother is a teacher,father is a doctor.They are both busy working.Usually,only my grandma,grandpa and I at home.They all love me very much.I am very fond of this home.
My household consists of five people.They are my grandmother,my grandfather,my father,my mother,and I.My mother is a school teacher.My father is a doctor.Both of my parents are busy with theirwork.Ordinarily I stay home with my grandmother and my grandfather.They love me very much.I love this home!
there are five people in my family,my grandfather,grandmather,father,mother and me.my mother is a teacher and my father,a doctor.they are both busy with their jobs.usually,i stay at home with grandpa and grandma and they like me very much.i love my family.
There are five people in my family.They are my grandparent、my parent and me.My mother is a teacher,my father is a doctor.They usually busy working.I and my grandparent at home as usual.
There are five people in my family,they are my grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me.My motheris a teacher,my father is a doctor,they are hustling and bustling everyday.Often,only me,grandma and grandpa at home.they love so much.I love my family.
帮我看看 有没有语法上的错误
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feidaxiou 种子

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第二个稍微好一些,语法错误少点
如果两个完整的独立的句子之间没有任何连词连接那就是错句
我给你一个没语法错误的
There are five people in my family,and they are my grandpa,grandma,my parents and me.My fahther is a doctor,and my mother is a teacher.They are bustling and hustlling everyday.Usually I stay at home with grandpa and grandma and they love me very much.I'm very fond of my family.

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柏村 幼苗

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我帮你再组合一下,呵呵:
There are five people in my family, they are my grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me. My mother is a teacher,my father is a doctor,they are hustling and bustling everyday.Usually,i stay at home with grandpa and grandma, and they like me very much. i love my family.

1年前

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jnym27 幼苗

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总体都差不多,最后一个稍微好点

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速转 幼苗

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There are five people in my family, and they are my grandpa,grandma, my parents and me.My fahther is a doctor, and my mother is a teacher.They are bustling and hustlling everyday. Usually I stay at home with grandpa and grandma and they love me very much. I'm very fond of my family.

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vivid520 幼苗

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看看这个怎么样
Tere are 5 people in my family. my grandma,grandpa ,father,mother and I.my mother is a tewcherand my father is a doctor.they all working wery hard so they don`t have much time stady at ...

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