英语翻译让我大为放心的是,她没发现什么不对劲.是他感到满意的是他儿子被清华大学录取了.他竟然走过来和我握手,令我着实吃了

1)
I greatly relieved that she did not find anything wrong.
或,To my great relieve,she did not find anything wrong.
2)
He was satisfied that his son was admitted to Tsinghua University.
或:To his satisfiction.his son was admitted to Tsinghua University.
3)
He even came over and shook my hand,I am really surprised.
或:To my great surprise,he even came over and shook hands with me.
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Let me greatly rest assured, that she didn't find out what's wrong.
Is his satisfaction is that his son by tsinghua university admission.
He unexpectedly coming and I shook hands, make me taken aback upon.

What makes me greatly relieved is that she did not discover what's wrong.
What makes him satisfied is that his son is admitted by Tsinghua University.
He unexpectedly came to shake my hands, which made me astonished.

Let me to feel relieved greatly, she had not discovered that anything does not suit. is he was what is satisfied was his son is enrolled by the Tsinghua University. he walks and me unexpectedly shakes hand, makes me to be startled really.