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你这里全篇都用的一般现在时。要是改为过去时的话,全文均要改动。就是这样: Danny has a friend.His name is Dan.They go to school by bike.But danny`s bike is broken today.They wanted to go to the bicycle shop behind the street and Danny wanted a new chain.The bicycle shop is far from here.They stopped and bought some ice creams.They felt cool then.Then they got there.