英语短文改错,共十处D I would like to tell you something more about ou

Dear Jim,
（首段顶格）I would like to tell you something （more去掉） about our school sports meet.It was holding（改成held,因为这是被动语态） on Oct.6th,（加and,因为这是并列分句） it was a fine day.There were over 1000 student（改成students） and teachers attended（改成attending,因为这里是主动关系而不是被动关系） it .Wang Lin ,a student from my class won the 100-meters （改成100-meter） race.He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record.The sports meet was really（加“a”,表示一次成功） success.That was because we were all trying to do my（改成our） best .Although I was not one of the winner（改成winners,one of后接复数名词）,I was proud of that（改成what,what在宾语从句里充当宾语,that引导宾语从句时不在从句中充当任何成分） we had done.
Looking forward to receive（改成receiving,因为look forward to中的to是介词） your letter.
Yours,Li Ping

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was holding改成held
100-metres改成100-metre
in改成at
student改成students
success改成successful
were trying改成tried
winner改成winners
that改成what
receive改成receiving

I would like to tell you something【 more 删掉 】about our school sports meet。 It was【 held】 on Oct.6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1000【 students】 and teachers【加who】 attended it . Wang Lin , ...