英语短文改错 共十处I was really worried about my little cousin.He spe

英语短文改错 共十处
I was really worried about my little cousin.He speaks too many time playing computer games.My aunt and uncle have to work,because they can't watch him all the time.During vacations,my cousin stays at home sitting in the front of his compter from morning tilll night almost every day.Because that,he has become short-sighted and fatness.I'm afraid if he doesn't stop playing computer games,I will suffer from it in the future.Nowadays,computers paly a very important role on our life.They make our life convenient and brings us a lot of fun.Therefore,they can also harm our health if we misuse them.
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sixdada 种子

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I am (was改成am) really worried about my little cousin.He spends(speaks改成spends) too much(many改成much) time playing computer games.My aunt and uncle have to work,so(because改成so) they can't watch him all the time.During vacations,my cousin stays at home sitting in (去掉the)front of his compter from morning till night almost every day.Because of( 加of )that,he has become short-sighted and fat (fatness改成fat).I'm afraid if he doesn't stop playing computer games,he( I改成he)will suffer from it in the future.Nowadays,computers play a very important role in (on改成in)our life.They make our life convenient and bring(brings改成bring )us a lot of fun.Therefore,they can also harm our health if we misuse them.

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lucky木小桔子 幼苗

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1.speaks--spends 2.many_much 3.in the front of ---去掉 the 4.Because---Because of
5. fatness--fat 6.I will suffer from -he will suffer from 7. paly -play 8.on our life---in our life
9.brings--bring 10.Therefore--however

1年前

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yy521-55 幼苗

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was-am; speaks-spends; too many-too much; because-so; in the front-去掉the; because that-because of that; fatness-fat; I will-he will; on-in; therefore-however
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清水悠扬 幼苗

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I was(was改为am) really worried about my little cousin.He speaks(应该是spends) too many(many改为much) time playing computer games.My aunt and uncle have to work,because(because改为so) they can't watch him all ...

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杨歆 幼苗

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many time 【s】
【because】My aunt and uncle have to work,【so】they can't watch him all the time
if he 【won't】
【in】our life
【bring】us a lot of fun

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