英语短文改错,共十处错误.Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.I h
英语短文改错,共十处错误.
Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.I have affered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further edcation.One hundred and twenty students took exams for it,so only a few was chosen and I was one of them.However,my parent are not happy about it.
先是前一段,先改错.后一段稍后.
后一段.
They are strong against my going there.They say it is so far away that they will not see me for a whole year and are afraid of I will feel lonely.They can't imagine a girl so young live alone.They advise I to study in the capital instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.What can I persuade them to accept the fact that I have grown up?
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Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.I have affered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further edcation.One hundred and twenty students took exams for it,so only a few was chosen and I was one of them.However,my parent are not happy about it.
先是前一段,先改错.后一段稍后.
后一段.
They are strong against my going there.They say it is so far away that they will not see me for a whole year and are afraid of I will feel lonely.They can't imagine a girl so young live alone.They advise I to study in the capital instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.What can I persuade them to accept the fact that I have grown up?
完了,请速改,
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