英语大神来,帮我看看这个 句子有哪些错误,该怎么改? If I could turn the clock back,I hope you did not appear in my life.because I can't make myself to stop loving you since I was met you,and I don't know how to just be a friend with the girl who made me fall in love with her at the first sight. 中文意思是: 如果时光可以倒流,我希望你不曾出现在我的生命里,因为从遇见你的那一刻起我就无法让自己不爱你,而且我也不知道该怎样和一个我一见钟情的女孩仅仅只做朋友.
I hope you did not appear in my life不换也是可以的,因为前面有助动词did,所以后面不用过去式 如果要换的,换成I hope you never appeared in my life,这些表达也要流畅些 建议你换成I hope you never appeared in my life 因为never表示从不态度更坚决一些,更能突出你这里的感情
If I go back in time, I hope you never appeared in my life, because I meet you from the moment I can't let oneself do not love you, and I don't know how to make friends with a girl who I fall in love at first sight only.
If I could turn back the clock , I hope you never appeared in my life, because from the moment I met you I can't let myself do not love you, and I don't know how to just be a friend with the girl who I fall in love at first sight .