英语短文改错Wang Dan,a quiet girl,is one that you can make friends
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Wang Dan,a quiet girl,is one that you can make friends.I got to know her three years before,when she was moved to the city with her parents.I still remember the afteroon that I first met her.She was working in a shoe shop where I was a regularly customer.We
then began to talk and I learned that we all studied in the same school.She took a part-time job in her spare time,hoped to be independent.Wang Dan gives me so much sunshines and makes me laugh so many.I have many friends here in the city,and never have I had a friend like her.
Wang Dan,a quiet girl,is one that you can make friends.I got to know her three years before,when she was moved to the city with her parents.I still remember the afteroon that I first met her.She was working in a shoe shop where I was a regularly customer.We
then began to talk and I learned that we all studied in the same school.She took a part-time job in her spare time,hoped to be independent.Wang Dan gives me so much sunshines and makes me laugh so many.I have many friends here in the city,and never have I had a friend like her.
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