英语短文改错、提高质量,today is June 5,2012It's Monday today.We had a f

today is June 5,2012
It's Monday today.We had classes all the day long.Because the exam was near,many teachers were not in the classroom.But we had to stay in the classroom to review the courses that had been learned.
其实还是不错的,大方向没错,基本说出了你想说的.多读一些东西你的写作就会有提高,告诉你,你的老师也不一定会比你写得好多少.不要泄气,你比我在你那个年纪时写得好多了.

today is June 5,2012
It's Monday today.We have classes all the day long.Because the final exam is drawing near,many teachers are not in the classroom.We have to stay in the classroom to review wha...

Today is june 5th,2012,Monday.We have been having classes all day long.With term exam approaching,many teachers are not giving lectures any more,so we have to stay in the classroom reviewing our cours...