英语短文改错题(逻辑错误,语法错误,拼写错误)
英语短文改错题(逻辑错误,语法错误,拼写错误)
A Blind Man
All is minfortune,at least,I hade admitted is for a long time
I was a clear-eyed infant and childbefore twelve years old,At that year, my awe-inspirng vision was dimmed by an accident.
I thought the angel who preside my vision has abandoned our indestructible companionship.
Soon,I rediscovered that I was inadequate to confront what had has happened and hanppening.
Self-defeated conquerd my heart,The mood always despair.I thought I could no longer do anything by myself.
But the Jesus still look after me ,use his majestic,sincerely power in disposal every earthly things.Though I didn’t know that yet rhen.
One day, I was walking along the river along rhe river ,stepping on the fertile ground,Some voice-in exactly it’s music played by Nature-was heared by my cute ears.Meanwhile I felt I was assimilated by the world, partly it aroused my heart which had slept so long. Henceforth,I was addicted with music.Everyday,when the dawn come,If you at the same place then,you can find a figure,stand against the flowing stream,was singing a song without words. That’s me ,who was singing with a many-voiced Nature-Chorus.
When I was singing,I could feeling the winds embodied soil’s perfume,I could feeling the clouds embodied fruits’flavour. I could feeling the tide ebb and flow,I could feeling the flower wither and bloom, I could feel infinitely things though my eyes disused.
“When the Lord close the door , somewhere He opens a window”
名词形容词其实没明确界限,可以多用的。多多指教!
我没觉得宗教意义极深啊? 我不是宗教人士。