哥哥,姐姐们,帮下,有篇英语作文不会写

As you can see ,there are many jobs in the world ,now I'm a clothing designer ,I will design clothes for a heavy person and a thin person .
All the people enjoy making their appearance(外表,如果没教过,用“look”代替用.)look nice and I'd try my best to make them feel happy.I will chose great cloth and give it a wonderful idea of Design
译文：就如你所见,现在的世界上有许多职业,我现在是一个服装设计师,我将要给一个胖子和瘦子设计服装,所有的人都希望能让自己的外表更美丽,我会尽自己最大的努力使他们满意,我会挑选好的布料,然后设计好服装.
我自己写的,检查了下,还蛮通顺的.