写了一篇英语作文,请高手帮忙批评修改.主要修改语法错误,还有的句子可不可以改成更高级的之类的.
写了一篇英语作文,请高手帮忙批评修改.主要修改语法错误,还有的句子可不可以改成更高级的之类的.
He is an ordinary people,but he look forword to getting success one day.He often look through the biography of some outstanding people.He is lost in the ocean of knowledge.But very soon,he is failure.Then,he is at a loss.Sometimes,he goes mad,and thinks“Why me always get failure”.He even want doesn't have lunch.After some days,he overcome the difficulty and realize that the success contists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.After that,he makes up his mind to face diverse challenges and get success step by step.Last,he get success and become a famous man.He write a novel according to his experice in memory of that hard time.
He is an ordinary people,but he look forword to getting success one day.He often look through the biography of some outstanding people.He is lost in the ocean of knowledge.But very soon,he is failure.Then,he is at a loss.Sometimes,he goes mad,and thinks“Why me always get failure”.He even want doesn't have lunch.After some days,he overcome the difficulty and realize that the success contists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.After that,he makes up his mind to face diverse challenges and get success step by step.Last,he get success and become a famous man.He write a novel according to his experice in memory of that hard time.
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He is an ordinary person,but looks forword to getting success some day.He often read biographies of some outstanding people.He is lost in the ocean of knowledge.But very soon,he faced failure again and again.He sometimes went mad and asked himself “Why me always have failure”.He even didn't want to eat.After some days,he overcomed the difficulty and realized that the loss of enthusiasm while facing failures would not get him any success.And he started to make up his mind to face diverse challenges and get success step by step.At last,he got success and became famous.He wrote a novel according to his own experice in memory of that hard time.
之前的错误较多,已修改.
之前的错误较多,已修改.
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