今天小臣白玫瑰心血来潮写了一篇英语作文,请诸位大侠帮批改一下.如果批改的好可有

今天小臣白玫瑰心血来潮写了一篇英语作文,请诸位大侠帮批改一下.如果批改的好可有
奖赏啊.奖赏多少有本人来决定.小妹在此先感谢.书面表达某公司招聘一名英文秘书写一封求职信包括年龄,学习情况及英语水平,兴趣和特长,性格特点.i learnd from the newspaper that your company needs an english secrestary .i'm very happy until i saw the information of your company.i'm very intreested in this work .i think i am fit for it .i hope you can invent me to your company and i can do it well. i'm 16 years old ,i 'm a student in class.but i preper like englisn in five subjects and do well in english especially speaking english .my hobbies are singing ,ducing ,reading and so on .my great advantage is tell jokes to everyone.above all i guess you can guess my character .i'm a living and outgoing girl.if you fell i fit this work and can give a chane to me ,call phone.i will very happy to hear from you message.