写了一篇英语作文,请帮忙改下(就是语法等等之类的错误) In the morning ,Bil goes to work by subway.He is a teacher ,he teaches math .his classes are very wonderful. After lunch ,he is in the office reads newspaper .at 5:30 ,he goes home .He watches TV in the evening and goes bed at 10. This is Bill's day 错误的地方请用【】在文中标出,或列在下面,4:00前要!
Morning,Bill goes to work by subway.He is a math teacher (上面两句话可以缩成一句,有点啰嗦).His classes are very wonderful. After lunch,he reads newspaper in the office.(有了be动词就不用动词了).At 5:30,he goes home.(后面的没什么问题了)
In the morning , Bil goes to work by subway.He is a teacher , he teaches math . his classes are very interesting。 After lunch , he office reads newspaper in the office. at 5:30 ,he goes home . He watches TV in the evening and goes bed at 10. This is Bill's day !
In the morning , Bil goes to work by subway.【He is a teacher , he teaches math .】 his classes are very wonderful. After lunch , 【he is in the office reads newspaper . 】at 5:30 ,he goes home . He watches TV in the evening and 【goes bed 】at 10. This is Bill's day !