我写了篇英语作文大家帮我看一下有没有语法错误或要修改的(我小学六年级)

我写了篇英语作文大家帮我看一下有没有语法错误或要修改的(我小学六年级)
Hello,everyone,this is Ying Jie.I’m going to have a Happy weekend!On Saturday,I’m going to the supermarket on foot .I’m going to buy some bread and some Juice.Then,I’m going to go home and eat a big meal.On Sunday,I’m going to the Playground Play basketball .Then,in the afternoon ,I’m going to the home do homework .in the evening i'm going to watch TV .That will be fun!
孤月杰拿斯 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

zhongbin8360516 幼苗

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Hello everyone,I am Ying Jie.I’m going to have a happy weekend!On the coming Saturday,I shall go to the supermarket on foot.I’m going to buy some bread and some juice.Then,I will go home and have a big meal in the evening.On Sunday,I will go to the playground to play basketball .In the afternoon,I will do my homework .In the evening I will watch TV.That will be fun!
(未来式不一定用 I'm going to.)

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孤月杰拿斯 举报

谢谢 我们这个单元教i'm going to…… 请问这篇作文有没有原则上的错误? 怎么不说话了……

举报 zhongbin8360516

每句都是Im going to...是作句, 不是作文. 原則上沒有大錯. 只是在句中不用把一些字加大階.

孤月杰拿斯 举报

谢谢 那可是如果每句都是I will算不算作句 如果有一句和别的不一样可不可以啊

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I'm going to.., I shall...., I will..... 都可.

孤月杰拿斯 举报

要多少悬赏

举报 zhongbin8360516

不用. 你採納我的答案是最佳答案就好了.

xfzxb 幼苗

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是不是在打电话,如果不是this is Ying Jie最好改成i'm Ying Jie
I’m going to the Playground Play basketball 应该是I’m going to the Playground and Play basketball (或者 I’m going to the Playground to Play basketbal...

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