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帮我看看有没有什么语法错误.
It was snowing and the snowflake drifted in the air.On feeling the touch of snowflakes toward my face,I prepared a surprise I had made a commitment.A photograph and a bracelet had been wrapped up in a pink bag of present.I wished I could send it to someone,but to my shocked,I was refused and I began knowing this was as far as we could go.The dream I had had for so many months ended there!Since then,I had been taking the bag with me and I hoped to obtain some apocalypses.At last,I understood some thing there were a few words looked like moving,actually they were lies just like:If the autumn is gone,I will wait for you on snow!If the word is gone,I will wait you in heaven!If you are gone,I will miss you in tears!I just want you to know I love you in the same way that the mouse love rice!….They were just bullshit and instrument of lying oneself.It was more than I could bear how to love anyone or how to be loved by anyone.It took my time,my money and my energy to do it,so let the love went to hell and it always chained to my progress.I never believed in the love.
But now,I think that I maybe wrong.Though I had lost a number of things and had done too many wrong things I should not do,I had to face the fact that had been happened.In fact everything rested with me.I had got the chance but I had not done it and I did not knew how to did it.I am a person which can not be understood by anyone.I also do not understand from anyone.I acted as if I was fool,for I mey be just a "fool".
I can write out such a big pile of bullshit that hardly can I believe it.
PS:Pull your leg any more.
I will never forget it through my whole life……