谁帮我看看我有没有语法错误,我比较笨

我首先我说的是,不要说自己笨,怎么能自己看不起自己呢?!
接着我要说的是,这片文章我是不是按改错题的做法做的,当一片文章读吧,也可能改的不是很完善.
改文如下：
I have been to France during last summer vacation.When arrived,I saw such a blue sky and I could breath fresh air.The streets in France were tidy and French service's quality were high .First,my parents and I were visited The Louvre Museum to see a lot of famous arts.Then we went to Versailles Palace .I knew this museum in Chinese book 1 years ago.It was the same as described in the book.It was big but not empty and seemd to be a fairy tale.After that we had some west food .It was neither like McDonalds nor KFC.It tasted uncomfortable for Chinese.But it was also an experience of my life.Finally,we got to Star Square to met Eiffel Tower.It can be equal with Great wall and it was quite a grate work.This trip let me learn how to enjoy life.

I went to France last summer. When we arrived, I felt such a blue sky and fresh air. The streets in France were tidy and French quality were high .First, my parents and I visited The Louvre Museum ...

line 1: in -> during
line 2: street -> streets; was->were
line 3: French quality were high 没看懂,至少也要把were 改为was, was visited的was 去掉.to -> and
....有点看不下去了.