请帮忙检查一篇英语作文有没有语法错误 以及什么地方能改进
请帮忙检查一篇英语作文有没有语法错误 以及什么地方能改进
There is a wonderful computer camp for the youth.All the students aged from 12 to 16 can attend it.The camp will make you do word processing,computer programming and homepage designing.They must be very interesting.The comp will begin on July 8 and wewill finish it on July 15.It will last one week.Each one should pay RMB 800 for it if he wants to take part in.I believe that it must be a helpful and unforgettable activity for everyone who experience it.
There is a wonderful computer camp for the youth.All the students aged from 12 to 16 can attend it.The camp will make you do word processing,computer programming and homepage designing.They must be very interesting.The comp will begin on July 8 and wewill finish it on July 15.It will last one week.Each one should pay RMB 800 for it if he wants to take part in.I believe that it must be a helpful and unforgettable activity for everyone who experience it.
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the camp wiil help you to learn ,.
it must be very intersting.
8th of july or july 8th
and it will be finished on 15th of july or july 15th
it will last on week, every student/ each one of students/members should pay
if student wants to
that it must be helpful
who experienced it
it must be very intersting.
8th of july or july 8th
and it will be finished on 15th of july or july 15th
it will last on week, every student/ each one of students/members should pay
if student wants to
that it must be helpful
who experienced it
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你能帮帮他们吗