请帮忙看看这段英语作文有什么语法错误的地方
请帮忙看看这段英语作文有什么语法错误的地方
我自己写的英语作文,想练习练习,没有老师给我修改,所以想请帮帮忙.如下:
In our life,we may have many experiences.They affect our fellings often.They can make us happy or sad.The bad feeling is bad for our health.So we must stay in good spirits.Here are some suggestions:
1.I like music a lot.So I think music can make me happy again.
2.Talk with friends is a useful idea.You can get some help from them.
3.I will feel happy when I wear my favorite clothes.I think you will also feel happy when you wear your favorite clothes.
4.Maybe sleep can change our feelings.If we sleep well,we will feel happy when we get up.