大家帮忙检查一篇英语作文里面有没有什么语病语法错误等,有没有单词拼写错误?懂英语的朋友帮忙改下.I lives look

大家帮忙检查一篇英语作文
里面有没有什么语病语法错误等,有没有单词拼写错误?
懂英语的朋友帮忙改下.
I lives looks like a pig
I lives looks like a pig during the Summer holidays
I like sleep very much because I feel tired every day.But I don’t know why!So,I go to bed very early and I get up very late.
Computer is my favorites.It can play the movie and music.I like listen the music so loudly,especially rock music.
Hamburger is very very delicious.I like it so much and I always eat a lot of.But it will make you fat!Have a good sleep after the meal.
After sleeping,eating sleeping end.Like living like pigs
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