英语翻译Thank you for your trust of our company.多谢你对我们公司的信任。Dela

Thanks for you trust us.
你在面对客户的时候,就代表公司了.
Delagated by Terry,I already asked the price of US-6912.
受Terry之托,我已经对产品US-6912询问过价钱.（要简化你的从句和状语意群,邮件要简练.）
Their offer is about US＄230 to 240.They will cut US＄10 if we order more than 10 units.
他们的报价是大概234到240美圆左右.超过10台的话,他们可以每台降价10美圆左右.(请注意要符合西方的倒装句式,不要将过多的名词堆在关键的价钱和价格)
Please inform me the QTY of the order and send e-mail to me,if the offer is acceptable.
如果你确定要买的话,请你通过e-mail告诉我你要买多少.(注意被动式的 BE动词 和倒装句式,要符合西方的语言习惯)
I look forward to your early reply.
Your prompt reply will be hihgly appreciated!(更佳委婉和体面一些)
期待你的早日回复.
楼主,我从事多年外贸,希望能够帮到你,请综合大家的最好意见.
希望你能做到此单,请斟酌!

Thank you for trust our company.
huve应该是have
they could cut the price aboutUS＄10最好写成they could give the discount about US$10.
the number of the product 应该是the amount of product.
最后一句：I looking forward to see your reply.

文字哪？？那里去了？

Thank you for your trust in our company. (如果写信人是一个人，最好是my company)
Entrusted by Terry, I have already inquired about the quotes of the product US-6912.
Their offers range from US＄234 to US$ ...

中文在哪里？？好像没传上来，再传一下大家看看

字呢字呢。。