英语高高手请进 不懂得免开金口 主要是Layer Cake的单复数的使用

英语高高手请进 不懂得免开金口 主要是Layer Cake的单复数的使用
the origin of Layer Cake
In the early 17th century,The Dutchman invade Indonesia,and rule over the Indonesia for 100 years .Indonesia has plentiful material resources,which is rich in natural perfume such as nutmeg,clove ,cinnamon.The Dutchman feel quite fan attachment for odoriferous spices.They integrate odoriferous spices with butter and herbs into layer cakes ,which are meticulous developed and baked at every layer.At that time ,Layer Cake became the most valued pastry .
After The Dutchman leaving ,the wise Indonesian Inherit and carry on process technology of layer cakes.The layer cakes are characterised by its golden yellow colour with rich layered ,a nice light texture ,intense aromas of herbs ,and an exceptionally long finish..The Indonesian layer cake is considered as the aristocrat of cake,sweeping Southeast Asia even the world quickly.The layer cakes has become pastries of first resort ,which serves as a good travel companion or a good gift for friends and the guest of honour .
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这样的翻译怎么样 还是觉得这样
seamark777 1年前 已收到1个回答 举报

亚当06 幼苗

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1,根据你本段的第一句话,里面的动词要用过去式,比如 invade ,rule .
2,The layer cakes has become pastries of first resort 这句话是错的,你用cakes,而后面用has
3,我认为the guest of honour 应该改为the honour of guests

1年前

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