求英语高手帮我看一下哪里有错It is natural that you facing great pressure b

求英语高手帮我看一下哪里有错
It is natural that you facing great pressure because you will jion in the most important exam of your life.but should find effective ways and face it bravely.First of all,you should be confidence of yourselfs and make a study plan so as to make full use of your time.secondly you should take some time to do sport and listen to light music.More importantly ifyou study hard,you will make progress which helps you though the college entrance examination