求英语高手帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法上的错误.

求英语高手帮我看看这篇作文有没有语法上的错误.
My School Life
I have many classes in our school,English,math,Chinese,art and more.My favorite subject is music.Because I think it’s relaxing.And I also like English,because I think it’s interesting.I like English teacher best,Miss Chen.She is very funny.I don’t like science.Because I think it’s very difficult.
At school,I usually play chess with my friend,Linda.I want to join the music club.Because I can play the guitar,but I can’t play it well.So I want to learn about music.
This is my school life.I am very happy!
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落在月光中的眼泪 幼苗

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注意学科单词首字母大写
第一句:I have many classes in our school,such as English,Math,Chinese,Arts and etc(表示“诸如此类”“等等”的意思).
第五句:I like Miss Chen best,my English teacher,who is very funny.
倒数第四句:Because I can play the guitar,but not very well.
没什么大问题,很不错的一篇文章~轻松有趣,就是解释的理由可以更具体一些~
favorite没有错~有两种拼法都可以的~楼下不要瞎说~

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sweguqwugqwgq 幼苗

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saebaliu 幼苗

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My School Life
( )I have many classes in our school,(there are )English,math,Chinese,art and more.My favorite subject is music.Because I think it’s relaxing.And I also like English,because I t...

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dbdo 幼苗

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math数学M应该大写 favorite应该为favourite music club最好大写

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tyd690514 幼苗

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She is very funny.
funny这词用的不好改成:humour:幽默。
文章大体无语法错误。

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xmjim 幼苗

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没错误

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