请英语高手帮我看一看下面这段中翻英是否正确

请英语高手帮我看一看下面这段中翻英是否正确
请带好姓名变更后的户口簿,驾驶证及健康保险证这些能确认你身份的文件,外加姓名变更后的银行存折以及受理卡,前来办理变更手续.
You must apply for a change with submission of documents with your new name such as your resident’s card,your health insurance and your driver’s license ,plus a passbook with your new name published by financial institution (exclude the one published by postal bureau) and your recipient’s card with you
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must 告诉别人“必须如何做”,但你一上来就用must for a change,这让人看不明白了.最好用:When you ...,you must ...
另外,for a change 的说法是否妥当?建议改为:When you go through the procedure regarding changes,you must bring with your ...

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