英语作文--帮忙找一下错误和不合适的地方,

如果你是一名学生的话,那我不得不说你英语确实比我好多了,本来我没有资格发言的,但我既然看到了还是留下点足迹嘛
第一排each couple could only 我认为用can稍微好一点,第二排introduced我觉得应该换为carried out好一点,第四排a country后应该加一个which,还是第四排后面点应该把very fast去掉不要,还有这句我没看懂是撒子意思or it can reach the same rate by consuming more resources,这句应该修改一下The output of a country is limited,more people means that GDP per capita is low,还有这句especially there is a shortage of talents,改为especially the shortage of talents,还有这句感觉不是很好Secondly,more people make the environment worse ,More water is used and more rubbish is produced：：：secondly,water is wildly used and rubbish becomes more and more,all that contributes to the worse envirment,感觉这样要稍微好一点,这一句感觉也有点不好generally in total 7 people,你可以根据前面的语境稍加修饰一下,That is really a tough job,这里用work要好一点,意为这确实是一件繁琐的事情：：：If they have brothers or sisters,the situation could be much better,最前面还应该加一点东西,加上“当然”一词,意为 当然,如果他们有弟弟妹妹,这种情况会稍微好一点,还有着一句我没看懂额：But be it that the policy does not exist,they may choose to bring the girl up
写得非常好啊,如果叫我写的话,我肯定写不出来,以上仅代表个人观点